• Epilektoi_Hoplitai@lemmy.ca
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    11 months ago

    I see that they used the wrong tense for “described”, but that could be a typo. Other than that it seems grammatical to me. I guess “alluded to” and “described” are redundant, but that’s more a stylistic defect than an actual error imo.