Timothy Murray lost his father earlier this year and had been asking his principal for counseling when she called in the police

  • agissilver@lemmy.world
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    11 months ago

    Your reading comprehension is not excellent. Remove the clause between the commas and the action becomes very clear.

    One mother said that… Garza called Child Protective Services on her.

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      11 months ago

      You may want to reconsider your own reading comprehension.

      One mother said that, after a meeting… in which her own mom questioned the school’s… [plans], Garza called Child Protective Services on her.

      Who is her and her own mom?

      It is not specified at all.

      You also completely failed to address the question at hand. OP asked who the “her” in “her own mom” is referring to. Your modified sentence doesn’t even acknowledge the “her” in question.