• Dojan@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    A comma, quotation marks, or hyphens would’ve solved the issue.

    • Please feed me, eyes.
    • “Please feed me” eyes
    • Please-feed-me eyes

    On the other hand, “Please feed me eyes” is a rather compelling title as is.

    • exscape@kbin.social
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      1 year ago

      The first doesn’t work, it suggests the dog wants “eyes” to give it its food. I think #2 is the best.